16.5 seconds of shame

I'm prepping some songs to put up on my website. Meaning, these are songs that are already done and ready to go, I'm just doing some last minute micromanaging. Open the Window is intriguing and hypnotic, but something about the first sixteen and a half seconds of it sounds like it's going to lose me. It has to ease in like that, but it still needs something ... not sure what ... getting hung up on some detail like this is the story of my life. Yeah, I know, this probably makes me sound like a cheezy Power Producer -- "gotta grab their attention!" -- but believe me, this song is the farthest thing away from a potential hit; I just want it to start up with a little more allure.